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The Writing Process

 

"Read! And your Lord is the Most Generous.
Who has taught (the writing) by the pen."

 [96: 3-4]
 


 

Though the names may vary,

there are basically five steps to the writing process:

 

1. Pre Writing

2. Writing

3. Revising

4. Proofreading

5. Publishing

 

Prewriting

The stage where the writer gathers and organizes ideas.  A writer may prewrite using some of the following methods:

  • Making lists.

  • Conducting research.

  • Formal or informal reading.

  • Interviews.

  • Brainstorming.

  • Webbing, clustering, or use of graphic organizers.

  • Outlining.

  • Remembering

  • Drawing.

  • Discussion.

  • Free writing, notebook or journal writing.

  • Note taking.

Prewriting is an important step of writing. It should not be skipped or cut short.  I typically tell my "students" that after prewriting using some sort of graphical organizer and then writing a good outline, the paper practically "writes itself."

Writing

The stage where the writer, using his prewriting materials, gets his thoughts down on paper. Many feel that at this stage, the writer should write and not worry too much about mechanics or style or organization or anything other than getting everything down on paper as quickly and as easily as possible.

The writer turns sketches, notes, and ideas into sentences and paragraphs at this point. The writer should have a "recognizable" beginning, middle, and end.

Tips for the writing stage include:

  • Double spacing the draft so you have room to add editing marks

  • Before you write, determine who the audience is.  Establishing your audience before you write, will make your writing easier as you can write “to that audience.”

  • Sometimes writers may put down their work for a day or two before moving on to revising.

Revising

During the revision stage, the writer may also want

 to get a response from a reader.

Writers usually go through three stages of revision:

Adding on. This is the easiest kind of revision to accomplish. After hearing from readers, writers often realize they have left out important details.

Moving around. As the writer adds more materials, ideas may begin to "bump" into each other or interact in unforeseen ways. Getting things in the right order becomes more and more important.

Cutting out. This is the hardest thing to do, but it is often the most valuable. By this point the writer may have accumulated far more material than he originally planned.


Editing

At this point, the writer focuses on mechanics: grammar, usage, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, etc. This is the point in the process where traditional editing occurs. Grammar, usage, punctuation, spelling and minor text changes (word choice, formatting) are, ideally, the only work the paper should need at this point.


Publishing

Ideally no changes of any kind occur at this point except those that affect presentation. Keep in mind, who your audience is and what the best form is for presenting your writing.

Publication can take many forms, including:

  • posting in classroom/study area

  • submitted for formal publication to a magazine, etc.

  • read out loud

  • collected in a portfolio or web gallery

  • email to a relative

BE CREATIVE!

 


 

Writing Process Checklist

 

This is a checklist that I made to walk my students through writing a paragraph or paper.

 

Teachers: Use to guide student through writing process.

Students: Use to guide yourself through writing your paper.

 

Printable Copy

 

Prewriting

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1. Pick/narrow your topic and then state (in writing) your topic and purpose for writing.  Example: (to compare/contrast Egypt and Yemen; to summarize the article “How Sharks Work,” to explain how to make wudhu.

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2. List your main points or use a graphical organizer (word web, T chart, Venn diagram, etc).

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3. For each main point, list 1-3 details to explain or illustrate that main point.

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4. Make an outline from your list/graphical organizer.

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5. Think about graphics/charts and other visual aids you might use to support your ideas. List them and where you would get them from. (clip art, url, etc).

Writing

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6. Write your topic sentence. This sentence sums up what you are writing about.  Try to briefly list your main points in the sentence if appropriate

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7. Write a sentence for your first main pointBegin with a transition word such as First, to begin, etc. Transitional/Terminal Words from TJ.

 

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8.   Write your details for the first main point in one or more sentences.

 

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9.   Repeat steps 6-8  for each main point.

 

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10.   Write a conclusion. The conclusion should begin with a terminal word or phrase (such as In conclusion, in short, etc) the conclusion should be a restatement of your topic sentence (but in different words).

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11. Make a title. Make sure the title matches the ideas of your topic sentence closely. Bold it and make the font a size larger than the body of your paragraph.

Revision

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12. Go back and review/revise your paper for content:

c      Did you stay on topic?  Make sure your supporting details actually support your main points and make sure your main points support your topic sentence.

c      Do your sentences make sense? Read them aloud and read only what you see, not what you think it should say.

c      Did you plagiarize?. If you quote something, make sure the actual saying is in quotes and that you having cited your references.  If possible, try to restate in your own words as much as possible unless you need to absolutely quote verbatim (word for word, i.e. ayah from the Quraan, or a hadith).

c      Can you make your verbs livelier? I.e. use exclaimed instead of said.

c      Can you add adjectives to make your writing more descriptive?

c      Can  you replace nouns with more interesting synonyms?

c      Does your conclusion sum up your paper?

 

Proofread

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13.Proofread your work for punctuation, spelling, and capitalization. Tip: look for one type of mistake at a time.

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14.Make sure you have indented your paragraphs.

Publish

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15. Add Graphics and designs to enhance your work, but don’t drown your paper in design and formatting

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16. Make your final copy and present it to your intended audience.

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17. You’re done, alhamdulillah!  Great job!

 


 

 

How do I actually teach writing?

 

Use the above 5 stage writing process model, walking your writer through each step.

 

Ideally, the homeschool writing teacher will walk the student through each step with each assignment until the writer is comfortable on his/her own. Writing isn't a skill that comes naturally for many people and, like other skills, is best learned with continual, guided practice.  We can't expect children to become good writers by assigning a writing assignment and wait for them to turn in a great piece of writing at the end of the week without any guidance.

 

Be sure to provide students with examples of good writing before expecting them to strike off on their own. If you are teaching how to compare/contrast, show them good examples of compare/contrast writings. If you want them to write a business letter, show them good examples of a business letter, etc.......

 

 

What types of assignments should I assign?

Real life writing assignments are the most valuable types of writing assignments because, after all, that is the purpose of teaching writing--for real life use. You will probably want to expose your student to as many types of writing as you can. Keep in mind the purposes of writing: to inform, to entertain,  to persuade, to describe, etc.

 

 

What are some examples of real life writing?

 

See TJ's Things We Write

pencil

 

 

The Writing Process

Writing Links


Links

ABCs of the Writing Process

The Writing Process Notebook

Writing Skills Resources

The Five Areas of Writing

The 5-Step Writing Process

Paragraph Development and Topic Sentences

The Writing Process Website

A Student's Guide to the Writing Process

Make Kids' Writing Shine

Get Writing

Instructional Strategies for Writing

Young Author's Workshop

Paragraph A Week Yearly Writing Program

 

 

 

Thanks for stopping by TJ's Early Childhood Pages.

Hope you found  the "write" resources.

 

 

 

 

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